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Les pacifistes contre la guerre

Coopland (8 pencils) | Sat, 2011-03-26 01:48

I had to make this logotype at school for the "Les pacifistes contre la guerre" movement. Tell me what you think about it. Thank you.

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DS | Sat, 2011-03-26 04:18

whats "Les pacifistes contre la guerre"

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Coopland | Sat, 2011-03-26 04:50

Oh, sorry. It means: "Pacifists against war"

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qwertyale | Sat, 2011-03-26 08:29

maybe the peace symbol need to be better applied.

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Anders | Sat, 2011-03-26 08:49

I think you mean "emos in circles".

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monkey1979 | Sat, 2011-03-26 16:17

look at the tumbmnail, it's pure porn.

i like it.

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Art D. Rector | Sat, 2011-03-26 17:35

This is one of those good thoughts that just doesn't work on paper. When you hang someone, their feet are hanging straight down. If the person could stand on the inside edges of the circle, obviously he wouldn't die. So you lose the entire hanging effect.

The text is terrible. Ugly font and those black bars are just a lazy way to fill space imho.

Sorry - reboot.

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Coopland | Sat, 2011-03-26 19:25

Thank you all. As mentionned, this is a school project so i'm not "destroyed" at all by the comments, i'm here to learn so i sit down and listen.

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sherry.ma | Sat, 2011-03-26 23:57

I honestly don't see how someone hanging translates to anti-war/pacifism. Yes, it's somewhat relevant but it doesn't click immediately. It's more like, "oh, ok; I kind of see how that works."

EDIT: Ah, the peace symbol wasn't very obvious to me until I read the other comments. Just sayin.

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Liorah | Sun, 2011-03-27 05:46

Technically, without the center 'leg', it's not a peace symbol, it's a Mercedes Benz logo.

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Anders | Sun, 2011-03-27 10:06

Probably wise to give him a huge penis, then.

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Coopland | Sun, 2011-03-27 16:02

I'll go for the penis. Thanx.

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wgzn | Wed, 2011-03-30 15:08

i also think the type is pretty bad. but i have a hunch that that was the look the OP was intending...

but yeah, its a creative idea. but i just dont think youre going to ever make the hanging dude as peace symbol concept work visually

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