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Less Red On This One

jmonroe (46 pencils) | Tue, 2008-03-11 01:14

I chose to reduce the red a bit and make it a little cleaner and less like a halloween looking image.

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mbennett2 | Tue, 2008-03-11 02:50

I think you need to come up with your logo first, then find a way to add the tag line. My advice is to come up with 20-30 different variations of the "studio 7", then go from there. Computers can limit your brain function.

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natobasso | Tue, 2008-03-11 02:55

And don't submit all your explorations. Just give us your top 1-3 versions after you do some work on your own.

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jmonroe | Tue, 2008-03-11 03:06

Didn't mean to clutter up the boards. A single designer with no beings to get feedback from around here. Sorry about that. Thanks.

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natobasso | Tue, 2008-03-11 15:51

No worries, just makes it easier to keep track. There are more and more posts on cb these days and organizing these threads in a consistent way is helpful.

Focus on the company name and forget about the tagline altogether. Just work with Studio 7, see what you come up with and show us the top 3 in one thread. EAsier to get a better composite critique, if you will, and you'll get more out of it too.

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dpc | Tue, 2008-03-11 03:14

Just my two cents... "Outside of the box" should never be used, even corporate america thinks it lame and laugh when that phrase comes up in a meeting.

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jmonroe | Tue, 2008-03-11 04:01

I appreciate everyone's criticism. I am going back to the drawing board with all the advice I received. I appreciate all of you.

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KMac | Tue, 2008-03-11 15:30

What about eliminating the box altogether? I think this design would be crisp and clean without the red outlined box. How about just the black circle representing the "o" and the 7 inside and dropped down below.

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