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Live Killers A Tribute to Queen band flyer

livekillers (10 pencils) | Wed, 2007-09-19 09:22

PLAYING AT A VENUE NEAR YOU VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!

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elbandido | Wed, 2007-09-19 21:32

Hey,

Looks like you are trying too hard to make a statement. You have a lot of different fonts and too much white space, which isn't always a bad thing. I hate to say it, but it looks very amateurish. I think you should Google some keywords related to your subject and get some ideas for design from other places. You need to awaken your mind.

I hope I'm not coming off the wrong way, every designer started somewhere and you can definitely build on this experience.

“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.” - Albert Einstein

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“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.” - Albert Einstein

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SlowX | Thu, 2007-09-20 16:49

I don't think design feedback is sought.
I think this is spam.

Hmmmmm.......

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Fraijanes | Fri, 2007-09-21 02:14

This is made in an automated banner maker on the web, so it is spam and the guy knows zipo about desing.

Later,

Caya

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