Logo 2nd stage option 2
nina (30 pencils) | Wed, 2009-05-20 16:08Hi - this is the 2nd option - please see the brief on the other critique I just put up. I have a problem here - the subheading of the departments can't be seen but I can't get the logo to work with the sub head anywhere else. Does anyone have any ideas? I feel like I've tried everything.
Critique very welcome.
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Why not use the six colors on all pieces, but for the specific subgroup, lift its color up out of the group, or enlarge it overall in situ, and set the subgroup name (Academics, or whatever) in that color, too? I think that would be cool.
Mara
an idea, just an idea. Maybe it would look really cool if you use the hyphen as part of the H as your logo kind of like
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Maybe it will look good maybe not.
dsaunadesign.com
Both are really nice ideas - I'm going to start experimenting a bit more and I'll try both. I'm showing first ideas tomorrow morning so I still have the chance to develop them.
LOVE THIS ONE!!!!
Nice work, nina. I wouldn't deviate from here.
Cheers.
3dog
"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber
i love it it is good simple and straight to the point
I appreciate all the help.