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Logo design

rachel (6 pencils) | Sun, 2005-12-04 09:47

Hi peeps, here's a logo design that i have done for my major project - a cookies and ice-cream shop with a carnival theme. What do you guys think?

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Ivan | Mon, 2005-12-05 07:16

I like the idea. The idea comes through the best in number 4. One thing needs work is the expression of the guy. He looks scared. I guess that is not the intention. Good work!

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rachel | Mon, 2005-12-05 07:57

thanks . i'll try to work on it. :)

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Pete | Tue, 2005-12-06 23:46

I agree with Ivan- perhaps a good approach would be to make the face somewhat more abstract - sort of like an emoticon, you know?

Or maybe just a mouth?

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