logo design

cerasoli (6 points) | Thu, 2011-03-31 16:55

Critique

this comp is for an online retail company where you can but US name brands from anywhere and have them shipped to you.

would love any feedback

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qwertyale | Thu, 2011-03-31 17:10

too much tiny details

yes I'm brazilian xD

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Art D. Rector | Thu, 2011-03-31 17:58

Yes - that globe can be simplified. And no shadow - the earth hangs in space. :)

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caoimghgin | Thu, 2011-03-31 19:02

Remove latitude/longitude/continents and fill globe with solid color. Make arrows much bigger.

Still, I'm not exactly feeling the communication. Show more comps.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

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DS | Fri, 2011-04-01 03:44

Simplify the globe, you could use a different color for the arrows or even a transparency effect, the negative treatment isn't working fine. yes make the arrows a lil bigger
and yeah the earth hangs in space lol

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cerasoli | Fri, 2011-04-01 13:52

much thanks, I'll revise the little details...and re-post

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