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anderson.santana13's picture
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logo for a musician named A.S2 - part 2

I'ts a logo for a rapper who mixes several genres in his music. I wanted a modern look!

Tell me what you think!

Thanks!

logo for a musician named A.S2 - part 2

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Piotr's picture
38 pencils

It could very well just be a personal preference on my part, but i find the period inside the "A" to be too small. Having just received a large, mind you healthy, dose of caffeine, sentence structure is falling apart on me.

If you make the circle larger i think it might alight with the top and bottom of the horizontal line in the "A" as well as the width of the letter S. It just seems too small compared with everything else.

I like the one on the left. the placement of the number 2 seems more natural with the curve of the S in that one.

MixiBoi's picture
61 pencils

His name is A.S2? And I thought I had a bad name. lol

The first one feels like a math problem. I like the second one, Tho I still feel like I'm looking at Egyptian Hieroglyphs, which is cool, and I am having a hard time seeing an S. Maybe a little farther out?

thn007's picture
6 pencils

dont get mad at me, but i think neither to be honest
the A looks more like a mathmatical device "cant remember the name"
like a protractor or something
i think u should look it over
listen to his music while creating the logo, it should realy help alot, trust me.
i am not a pro myself, still in my bachelors year, so its alright if u dont like the critic... after all, just an opinion :)

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