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anderson.santana13's picture
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logo for a musician named A.S2 - rap music

I would like to know what you think about these two ideas. Inspite of being a rapper logo I want to convey an idea of modern and inovative things and not the stereotypical graffitti and all that stuff everybody does. His music is a fusion of rap with some other genres, that's why I came up with the idea of making the fusion between the "A" and the "S"..

I've just started learning Illustrator a month ago, so don't be too hard on me...hehe

Thanks

logo for a musician named A.S2 - rap music

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anny's picture
11 pencils

The only reason this isn't working for me, is because it reminds of some kind of fraternity symbol. (sorry) I think the A needs to look like an A. I like the dot idea on the A though.

anderson.santana13's picture
19 pencils

thanx for the comment! I'll post two new ideas later... and the A will look more like an A...lol

if you could comment again.. it would be great!

thanks

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

I'd remove the orange background for best visibility.

The A is covering the S more than being fused with it, though the hole/rivet is an interesting idea; urban and well put together. The 2, however, looks disjointed and not fused with the A or the S at all. Why?

Otherwise, interesting concept.

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anderson.santana13's picture
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thanks for the tips man!

i'll post 2 new ideas later and it would be cool if you could comment again! if it's not too much too ask!

thanx!

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