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Logo for an event

RohanJM (103 pencils) | Fri, 2008-01-04 16:49

Logo for an event to help save stray dogs.

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natobasso | Fri, 2008-01-04 16:57

Not bad! Why is there a gray blob behind the dog outline?

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RohanJM | Fri, 2008-01-04 17:05

Trying to fill in the face... should have been more blurred

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pokie | Fri, 2008-01-04 18:05

Leave the gradient off. Make it simplified. Also, scale down to about 1/4th the size. Imagine how those lines will thicken when printed. I'd get rid of the hairlines. I'd maybe make it more general and maybe even try a different image all together.

It almost looks like on the top one that there is a tail coming from the word "strays".. that might be a cool way to incorporate not only dogs but cats too. Not sure.

Try something more obscure though. Dog's face is a bit too obvious.

I do like the type treatment though!

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mokenke | Fri, 2008-01-04 19:53

I like this. I think the lines could be a bit more stylized, with a little less detail in the ear for example. I think a light brown would work better than a gray but I don't know the color limitations of the project. Serifs work well for this.

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