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julianaduque's picture
168 pencils

LOGO FOR OFFICE BUILDING

THIS IS A LOGO FOR OFFICE BUILDINGS. TORRES MEANS TWO TOWERS... SO THE IDEA WAS TO MAKE THE TWO TOWERS STAND OUT FROM THE SKYLINE, THIS SPEAKS OUT TO THE CUSTOMER AS IT SAYS "YOUR BUSINESS WILL STAND OUT OF YOU HAVE YOUR OFFICE HERE" HEHEHE.

LOGO FOR OFFICE BUILDING

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3dogmama's picture
1994 pencils

Like this one.

ttfn!
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KMac's picture
29 pencils

I think this is very good. Simple, yet effective, and the point gets across.

But, I would alternate the colors. I would make the two tall towers white, and the skyline buildings black. Right now the white really stands out, and for me, is the focal point, whereas the two tall buildings should be the focus. I think this will easily be fixed once you make the tall towers white instead of black.

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KellyR's picture
520 pencils

I agree with Katie on this one - switch what's black and white where the buildings are concerned.

I'm also not too sure about the overlapping of the buildings where you can see the lines of the building(s) behind whichever one is supposed to represent the front-most building.

Did you try it without the lines showing through? (Not sure if I'm making much sense).

Piotr's picture
38 pencils

Before I even looked over the comments I was about to make the same suggestion as Katie. The focus seems to be on the 3 small buildings because of the strong contrast of the white to the green.

I also see the point that Kelly has about having the building overlap each other instead of being an outline of the building that you can see through. But i also like the effect of all of those buildings being connected, as a single line, the way they are now (who can make sense out of this one?!).

overall, i really like it.

pokie's picture
1198 pencils

I was also going to say switch the white with the black...

julianaduque's picture
168 pencils

I think all you guys are right about switching the gray and white... I'll give that a try. Thanks a lot!!! Sometimes you miss simple things like that, that can really make a difference.

mbennett2's picture
425 pencils

Also it seems as if the "94" is either lower than the "torres", or in a smaller font, or both. If it is intentional and meant as part of the design, then it is too subtle and just looks like a mistake.

thn007's picture
6 pencils

i love it, its lovely
but i think the grey should start right above the white building
give it a shot and wsee how it will look like :)

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