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Logo Ideas

Bdog (36 pencils) | Tue, 2011-12-06 11:16

4 Logo Ideas for a friends skate board shop

All critisism appreciated

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wgzn | Tue, 2011-12-06 13:11

cant read most of them. i read SeanisSkateboorals

the type choice on the moon thing is enjoyable. but the colored background is distracting and to a degree out of character.

not so sure i understand your haphazard use of periods...?

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Colinb424 | Tue, 2011-12-06 13:15

Agreed. Lose all the rainbow colors. Of all of them, the "Moon Skateboards" is the best. Is he still deciding on a name?

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Bdog | Tue, 2011-12-06 13:26

Yeah still deciding on a name, it's completely from scratch.
I thought the last 2 were most effective, plenty more to come

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Anders | Tue, 2011-12-06 14:57

Illegible, visually repulsive, no communication.

Full reboot.

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YoungZM | Tue, 2011-12-06 15:45

Respectfully, if your logo revolves around the name and you're still deciding on the name, aren't you jumping the gun at the moment? I'd brainstorm with mindmaps and see what is visually stimulating about your friends company and what s/he wants to communicate. This doesn't overly say much to me aside from super happy rainbows which will be very hard to reproduce (and look like crap in mudded CMYK anyways).

Also, you can't just "add" TM at the end of a logo to make it feel more legitimate. It's a legal addition that you actually have to pay for in most countries.

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Art D. Rector | Wed, 2011-12-07 20:25

+4. Reboot.

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Hof | Thu, 2011-12-08 08:25

it doesn't have the "skater" feel. make it a bit gritty and chaotic, this looks too square. i can't imagine this as a sticker under a deck or a helmet. skating is fast, dynamic and experimental work based on these i'm sure you'll come up with a better logo.

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