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deehazzz's picture
29 pencils

Logo for a new brand of clothing

Its a new brand of clothing: INVOKE. Its a creative clothing style which requires creative input in each and every of collection...Invoking fresh ideas.

Logo for a new brand of clothing

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Art D. Rector's picture
2639 pencils

Interesting - did you draw the totem yourself? Because this would be the last place to use clip art (you know that... right?) The font works very well with the art, but "invoke" needs more heft imho (and maybe a capital "I"). The two pieces also seem disconnected to me - there's nothing holding the entire idea together as one. I'd work on that if I were you - the physical relationship between name and mark.

Another minor point is those white teeth are going to be problematic at times (like one color jobs) - but the split should work without the white (more or less).

Overall - a nice start. Good work.

www.jackmancer.com's picture
547 pencils

I like it too. I agree with Art, and definitely ditch the white. Use two colours.

Donkdafied's picture
72 pencils

The tiki does look an awful lot like clip-art I've seen. If your gonna use a tiki as the logo you need to do your research. A tiki usually represents a specific Deity in Polynesian culture so pick the right tiki for the job. Do some more digging for this logo. I like the font choice on the bottom, but would like to see the "i" as a capital letter imho.

deehazzz's picture
29 pencils

I wanted to stress on the symbol. That's why i kept the font simple and thin enough.

Thank you. These would definitely help.
I'll upload the updated version soon.

Leaky Penny's picture
2592 pencils

Invoking fresh ideas huh?

Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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Ivan's picture

I quite like it. Work on a single color version first.

sojioguns's picture
8 pencils

I think I like it and the missing link would be added if you say this clothing line specializes in the use of local fabrics to make urban wear.
Does it?

deehazzz's picture
29 pencils

Here is the updated version. Yes it is a local brand meant for Urban wear.
I had to modify the mouth as the one colour version looks odd with the same old shape.
My only concern is the uppercase "I"; it looks like "L".

Art D. Rector's picture
2639 pencils

The mouth fix worked for me. The capital "I" doesn't. And these are still two separate pieces for me - not a one unit brand.

The kerning needs tweaking too.

Donkdafied's picture
72 pencils

Thought I saw this tiki before. http://www.dreamstime.com/comp.php?imageid=3467726&type=1 You should redo this you may get yourself into trouble.

www.jackmancer.com's picture
547 pencils

Nice catch ;p we where looking at ripped artwork.

Leaky Penny's picture
2592 pencils

Good catch. I searched as well but couldn't find anything, what did you search for?

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

Donkdafied's picture
72 pencils

Searched under tiki's or Hawaii pattern. Lol, I actually have this graphic in my-clipart collection.

NRcreative's picture
239 pencils

auch! caught! no problem i do understand that not everybody uses to draw tikis

monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

oooops.... -1,000,000,000.

I have seen many a logo being pointed out here as being too close to another design, but never complete plagiarism.

It seems the team here have eagle eyes...

living on dreams and custard creams.

Anders's picture
413 pencils

Well that's quite pathetic.

riqsane's picture
149 pencils

Your a fricken idiot.

Anonymous's picture
141 pencils

This piece of intellectual property ® cannot be trademarked TM as it has been plagarised ©. And neither can the tiki ®©TM

Write a wise saying and your name will live forever – Anonymous.

http://theghostwriterinthemachine.blogspot.com

Art D. Rector's picture
2639 pencils

Yeah - I thought it looked a little clip-arty. Nice catch, Donk.

Good lesson for the kiddies - pinch and you'll probably be pinched. Better to get busted here than out in the world where it will cost you a client and probably a nice chunk of change too.

riskart1's picture
146 pencils

I love the typography. Tiki doesn't say "new" to me, unless it was for surfing clothes and accessories- Then it would still need a different edge to it. But at least you used an attractive more modern version of a tiki.

jr2304's picture
22 pencils

I think it's pretty ace. I like the tribal mask look..nic e use of colours on this example.

dakinelopez's picture
53 pencils

looks like every other maori or hawaiian logo to me but, i am from there so....too bad its a fake

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