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Venividiviciii's picture
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again..

guess now im reaching somewhere..!
plz suggest ..
extreme right n bottom one i like..!!

again..

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3dogmama's picture
1994 pencils

I'm not minding the top center one, but with a little less twist to the mark. Plus I'd recommend leaving the smaller line of text off when the logo needs to be reduced.

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Venividiviciii's picture
13 pencils

the only thing is the space in between is just too much..
im kinda inclined towards the right one..it has a sort of harmony..
the typeface is the fourth petal..

Art D. Rector's picture
2639 pencils

My suggestion would be a name change. It should be...

"Winds – Beanery & Coffeehouse"

Which gives you a perfect marketing campaign:

"Get the Winds"

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

I like the one on the far left with some edits:

1. Remove the small tagline - you can see it disappears at this small size and it's just distracting.

2. Put the word Winds to the right of the icon and see how that looks, being aware of sizing/balance between the two.

Then I think you have a really cool logo. With good marketing Winds will be synonymous with fine dining. :)

qwertyale's picture
1770 pencils

hmm... maybe the right with:
same measure for yellow petal as others (seems rather big)
85% height for logotype
test some different text align / colors / sizes

I still think your first is better just need refinments

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ranamaju's picture
222 pencils

According to me there is no marriage between the typeface & graphics. If you separate them, it will become two different logo.

Wind can easily stand windy itself.

Thanks!
RANAMAJU

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furrychinch's picture
37 pencils

Ran across this logo and thought it might help...

Bureauplus's picture
196 pencils

What happend to my comment?

robbie's picture
356 pencils

I think they ditched the critique and re-posted with the correct spelling!!

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

Art D. Rector's picture
2639 pencils

Rearrange the petals on Qwerty's version so "Winds" becomes a horizontal petal. Then it should work. Although I must say - I'm not nearly as psyched for this logo as everyone else seems to be. The colors are nice, but it really doesn't move me.

Sorry. As always... jmho.

aroberts's picture
262 pencils

I like where these are going, and the colors are nice, but idk, I feel that the shape is just so generic. Like the font is saying something more organic and free but the leaf/petal shape thing is saying "i was computer generated" Maybe if you played with the shapes to make them just slightly imperfect it would look more cohesive with the identity you're going for.

qwertyale's picture
1770 pencils

yes it bring us a déjà vu, but maybe still acceptable if translates a "variety of flavors" concept

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yes I'm brazilian xD

Art D. Rector's picture
2639 pencils

Damn Qwerty - you're definitely the king of finding similar logos.

qwertyale's picture
1770 pencils

I born to be a duck hunter xD

yes I'm brazilian xD

qwertyale's picture
1770 pencils

we need to mention:

yes I'm brazilian xD

Venividiviciii's picture
13 pencils

Thank you all..!!
ill very soon update the final version..

Venividiviciii's picture
13 pencils

@Bureauplus: my appologies...
i by mistake deleted that page...
but ur crit is definitely valued.

Bureauplus's picture
196 pencils

Ah, ok. Thankyou. :)

Bureauplus's picture
196 pencils

Now QWERTY has the same idea.. A bit late though

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