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Logo v4

MarianaSimpson (29 pencils) | Tue, 2008-08-26 18:15

Well, I show you a new try.
Ppppppplease, tell what do you think about it.
Thanks again x 1000000

Mariana

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gwells | Tue, 2008-08-26 19:24

i don't get it. what do the boxes represent? why the randomly placed lower case "t"?

as far as the word mark, i'm not thrilled with the font, but you need to do some kerning there. it's very loose, the "ny" especially.

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Leaky Penny | Tue, 2008-08-26 21:48

Start over.

You haven't taken into account nato's suggestion of reading the What is a logo Post. Here it is again :

http://creativebits.org/what_is_a_logo

GO there. When you're done with that:

Grab a PENCIL. DRAW out three DIFFERENT concepts. Scan it in. POST it.

Keywords PENCIL, DRAW, DIFFERENT and POST. Stop wasting time with the same dead, bland concepts.

Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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MarianaSimpson | Tue, 2008-08-26 22:17

Ok, I will do, tomorrow I will be out, but after tomorrow I hope have some draws.

Thank you and sorry to be so...

M.
pd: I will read again that post, and the link "9 rules to creating a logo." doesn't work, but I will read again and hope get better.

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Leaky Penny | Tue, 2008-08-26 22:24

It will pay off. Can you imagine what a client would think if you kept going to them for aprroval or feedback on the slightest of changes? They'd probably be thinking twice about hiring you. Read those posts, check out www.logopond.com as well, get inspired, draw some logos!

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

Believe it or not, I can actually draw. - Jean Michel Basquiat

—

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

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