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futuresign's picture
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Louisville's Pam

This was created for a friend of mine who participated as volleyball coach for the US Olympic team.

It falls in line with a series of posters hung throughout Louisville, KY.

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keefomatic's picture
18 pencils

Louisville Spam?

futuresign's picture
71 pencils

Sooo... not enough spacing huh... lol

By the way, Louisville loves Spam.

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

Needs a little more crossover on the photos too.

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

This is good. Simple but good.

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3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

To help separate the words, you could try reversing LOUISVILLE'S from a U.S. blue background, and the word PAM from a U.S. red background. And reverse a star out of the "A"...plays double duty to being a star and part of the U.S.

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aroberts's picture
262 pencils

This doesn't work. Honestly, the audience only cares about her in the context of olympic volleyball, but I don't see any volleyball going on. The composition is static- if we're talking sports here, we should see some action.

All in all, this is a very boring and safe design.

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

Louisville has more PAMs...

She needs something more special...

like a volley ball ?

yes I'm brazilian xD

taba's picture
163 pencils

Pam.....Who? I think her last name should be on here too. Maybe a typeface without such variation of thicks and thins - adds to the visual clutter (with the stars and stripes and colors).

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