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NRcreative's picture
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Lovely pet

Allright guys, it has been a while since my last post but i`m back.

you might asociate this post with one of my previous posts pimpy & canela, the partner of that client liked the logo so much that wanted to get something similar but not quite the same, well deffinitely no copy paste here.

Trying to keep it simple, same bussiness, kinda same concept but going more cute pie on this one.

the colors will be pastels, client wants same dar brown and pink but i wanted to play a bit before sticking to that.

all comments welcome as allways

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NRcreative's picture
239 pencils

might look like a 20 min design but took only 10 so yes it is first round, really dont have much time for this one.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

the original was WAY better

Leaky Penny's picture
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The first one was way better. this one doesn't even look like it was created by the same person.

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NRcreative's picture
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jajaja thanks for being honest, but you realize this is not a remake of the first one right, this is a totally different one for a different client yet using kinda the same idea, sorry for not explaining that a little better. but since i dont have much time but dont want to give the client something crapy either, what are your suggestions.

caoimghgin's picture
845 pencils

I'm not seeing any effort here. At all.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

Anders's picture
413 pencils

A sad panda with a bow-tie. Nice.

monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

looks a bit like pedo bear.

The type is nice.

(EDIT) Seeing it in colour made a lot more sense. Still overly cutesy for me though...

living on dreams and custard creams.

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

love concept could be more tender.

I just imagine a dog that want to make sex wiith my legs.

yes I'm brazilian xD

Art D. Rector's picture
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Can't remember the other one.

But this one the text is totally overpowering the mark which is workable, imho.

NRcreative's picture
239 pencils

ok so the concept isnt too bad? thanks! again it is totally true that i havent put much work on it yet but wanted some guidance so that i dont waste time on a wrong concept.

art if it is workable what do you sugest i could do to make it work?

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

The mark with all the hearts is workable for me - but the font is way too heavy. I'd try some lighter typefaces and refine the dog a little.

But first, you should probably rethink the first one you posted. I don't remember it (maybe I didn't see it), but everyone here seems to think it was better - I'd respect their opinions and reconsider that one too.

nicky2's picture
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The Original is better.

NRcreative's picture
239 pencils

thanks guys for saying the original was better but i also want to remind you that this is the original because this is another client, i am not re-doing pimpi & canela that is done allready, this is a different place.

vinced's picture
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I think that original is better.

Art D. Rector's picture
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Oh - Pimpi and Canela - yes that one was wonderful. Loved those dog illustrations.

Agree - much better.

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