Lucky Bird Design business card options

Submitted by riskart on Fri, 2008-08-22 18:17.

Critique

I'm sure you all are tired of me by now, but I have nobody to help critique my work. This really helps me out!

Of the three options I have made a little space on the back of the card where I can write my address, or other notes specific to the person I am giving it to, or they can write notes about me.

The reason I am not putting my address on the card is because I will probably be moving in the future and I want to save some $$.

Thanks

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Very Good...

Submitted by caoimghgin on Fri, 2008-08-22 19:43.

Number 2 is it.

I noticed somebody commenting that the typeface looks a little crowded and I tend to agree. Kern everything out a bit and drop the "Design" downwards (appropriately). Just need a bit more breathing room.

Looks great.

I think you are jumping the

Submitted by mbennett2 on Mon, 2008-08-25 16:22.

I think you are jumping the gun just a bit considering that you don't appear to have settled completely on a logo yet. For the record, I like the logo in the middle example best.

I like the middle one the best...

Submitted by Leaky Penny on Tue, 2008-08-26 01:04.

but the back looks like bad wallpaper. Drop the branch, the space to write your address is a good idea, but the pattern has to go. Something about a designer who doesn't have one set address...somethign I can't quite put my finger on...maybe a P.O. Box?

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