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Massage Therapy Logo, The End

mara06 (2548 pencils) | Wed, 2009-07-15 14:26

Thanks to all of you for your input. Here's what I think might work. Reactions?

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caoimghgin | Wed, 2009-07-15 16:55

I like. Perhaps Anam Cara on same line, but otherwise, I think the mark works well.

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gwells | Wed, 2009-07-15 18:02

i think on this thumbnail, you can see my concern about the dots starting to show, as they start looking closer to a line.

i think your type is much better here. a little organic.

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3dogmama | Wed, 2009-07-15 21:33

First impression...beautiful.

I would also defer to gwells' concerns regarding the dots in the lotus...

Nice work, Mara.
3dog

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mara06 | Wed, 2009-07-15 23:24

Thanks, mama. OH ALL RIGHT!!!...grumble grumble...I took out the dots...grumble. They were my attempt to "Irish-ize" (hey! a pun!) the lotus blossom. Oh well. Sister-in-law's reaction to come. We shall see :-)

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3dogmama | Wed, 2009-07-15 23:45

Irish-ize" (hey! a pun!)

LOL! Hope they're smilin'!

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mara06 | Thu, 2009-07-16 00:31

Now if only I could gear up to create my own typeface for this. I know what Greg has in mind. Really, I do.

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gwells | Thu, 2009-07-16 13:57

lol... sorry, didn't mean to push you over that edge, necessarily. ;)

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mara06 | Thu, 2009-07-16 16:03

Oh honey, I've been over the edge for years. Not to worry ;-)

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Leaky Penny | Thu, 2009-07-16 11:55

You did it! It looks fantastic, I would probably make the mark a liiiiittle bigger so as not to lose the knot.

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mara06 | Thu, 2009-07-16 16:03

Hmm. Yep. I see that, too. Will do.

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Ivan | Thu, 2009-07-16 12:20

Good work overall!

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mara06 | Thu, 2009-07-16 16:04

Thanks, Ivan. Family members are the toughest clients of all. At least this one paid me! :-)

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GregSauce | Thu, 2009-07-16 18:21

let us know what she thinks.. it's always interesting to see things from the client's eyes

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mara06 | Thu, 2009-07-16 20:29

WIll do.

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