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My little place on the internet My Blog and some promotion for Neue Creative. What do you guys think?

Matt Davey - Graphic and Web Design www.mdfolio.co.uk

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natobasso's picture
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I think a two column layout would work better (left large, right narrow) because right now all your content is squished together. And there's no title at top left to serve as a home link, besides the sunglasses. The name of your site would go well there. Otherwise, well designed!

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julianaduque's picture
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Can´t really comment, hard to see the layout because of the pages overlapping. Can you post the pages separetly? That way they´d be easier to see.

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Matt Davey - Graphic and Web Design www.mdfolio.co.uk

mara06's picture
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Looks like a "barker" site for all the stuff you're selling/promoting/whatever-ing. If the site is supposed to sell your skills as a designer, a portfolio full of mostly cat snaps at a Flickr link isn't quite going to do the trick. Did I miss the "comedian" part of "hire me as a designer or comedian" or was that supposed to be a joke? If so, I don't get it. (British humor is something a lot of Americans don't get, though, so maybe that's *my* problem, not yours!) The actual Neue Creative portfolio appears to be empty, which is a pity.

There's an awful lot of stuff in this site, very little of which is really coherent. Much of it contains overlapping themes, so the sections don't stand out clearly and one is left wondering what the point is. "Content-heavy" would be one expression I could draw on to describe it, except the content is actually very light. (Can there be too much of a nothingness? Maybe so.) And maybe at this transitional stage in your life, that's a reflection of what's going on -- so many possibilities, so little discernment.

Mara

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