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Dozer Creations's picture
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Method Logo

Working on a new service company for the agency market. Want to provide the service of a boutique with the horsepower of a large pre-press / print house. Depending on the task will determine what method is used for the solution... Please let me know your thoughts.

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3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

I see what you're trying to attempt here...variety of styles...but my first impression of it was "am I having a stroke"?

"creative productions" will be lost at a reduced size.

I like the name, but feel you need to sit down and doodle some more...even if you've already done 60 or 80 scribbles all ready.

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Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Nope. Start over.

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robbie's picture
356 pencils

I think you are going along the right lines but just need to portray it a bit better, this is really chaotic and i can imagine walking into this business and it be a mess with everyone stressed and over worked!
keep it simple, its a print shop, this branding will make or break the company.

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

Alex's picture
380 pencils

You've got the starting point of a concept there, but it feels to me like you've jumped into illustrator too early - this mockup isn't working.

Go back a few steps to the sketching/thumbnail stage and focus on your core idea. Refine it and perfect it and then, when you are confident that you know what it is, move to illustrator.

Anders's picture
413 pencils

Could use a lens flare.

A strong one.

Dozer Creations's picture
43 pencils

Are you sure it's not phallic too?

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

Print and prepress is all about perfection. This looks like the #1 prepress nightmare - font defaults. You might go in this direction for a creative business, but not if you're planning to incorporate printing and prepress too. Those guys are the anal end of the business. You need to bridge the gap.

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