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plancaster's picture
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Modernising a logo

Hi I'm looking for a bit of advice re a clients request to modernise their logo. They like the logo I designed for them a few years ago (5) but would like it tweeked ever so slightly as they will have to rebrand due to the adding of a tag line.
Before I get started, I would like to get your comments on the logo as it is....
Thanks

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Anders's picture
413 pencils

Not crazy about the font. Doesn't blend well with the V either.

plancaster's picture
28 pencils

Thanks for your comment.
The v and the dot from the i are making a eye, does that not come through???

Anders's picture
413 pencils

I did not recognize it until you told me.

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

I saw the eye, I kinda like the eye, but I would probably make that V a little bigger and not aligning it on the bottom with the other letters.
That tagline is rubbing me the wrong way though, it's too small and it seems like there are actually two taglines. Pick one, go with it.

Leaky Penny
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plancaster's picture
28 pencils

Cheers for the comments Leaky, I'll take your advice and play around with the V, but as for the tagline your spot on ADVERTISING SOLUTIONS was the original tag and now they want to add THE IN-STORE SPECIALISTS....

Robinette's picture
10 pencils

I didn't see the eye either until you said it. Right now it sort of has an Egyptian look to it. I just say work on the V and it would be great.

caoimghgin's picture
845 pencils

Overall I think the logo is quite good. It's very strong and pleasing. Of course, this will be the 'old' logo as you haven't started approaching the modern treatment.

If I were to find things to critique I'd think I'd want more white space between the 'V' and the 'i'. The tagline is too small and is difficult to see. A wide variety of solutions are available for that.

As far as modernizing the logo, my first impression is gently round off the san serifs. Once you have that, it may influence your decision on what font the 'V' should look like.

My two cents.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

I didn't read the "eye" until you pointed it out either. The letters are too bold for the V - they’re carrying a lot more weight. The "eye" would be more apparent with either a heavier dot on the i or the pupil reversed out somehow. But you should work on other ideas too. That's a very strong company name - read it literally and it's... "visual eyes". With that kind of starting point, you should be able to come up with something striking that doesn't need any explanation. The name, two letter i's... two circular letters... two S's... you have a LOT to work with here. Let's see some magic.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

i didnt see the eye either. and even when i know its there, i still have to force myself to see it.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

its funny how so many people who are proven competent (or very good) designers. see things so radically different...

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

it does look very "1996" though...

caoimghgin's picture
845 pencils

True.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

Anonymous's picture
141 pencils

Having two occurrences of the letter i in the word may be a red herring.
Consider the following:
I = self;
special eyes = in-store.
visualise = conceptual eyes vis-a-vis advert eyes solutions;
Also: eye of the tiger.
Each of these could in someway be red herrings too.
Don't over anal eyes it. Just modern eyes and style eyes the logo a little.

Write a wise saying and your name will live forever – Anonymous.

http://theghostwriterinthemachine.blogspot.com

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

Now he's totally lost.

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

You sound like a batman villain. Campy Adam West Batman. Like a villain obsessed with eyes, kinda like an Egghead or Bookwork.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

plancaster's picture
28 pencils

Thanks for all your comments, all digested and now its time to get working. One last thing I am looking for a nice clean modern geometric sans font with a twist any suggestions??

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

g480s
(good for 80's)

yes I'm brazilian xD

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