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monther (33 pencils) | Sun, 2007-12-16 15:42

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natobasso | Sun, 2007-12-16 16:10

What's the creative brief for this?

Your subject (the couch) is VERY hard to see. Hopefully the final print ad didn't come out this washed out! Otherwise, good work.

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monther | Mon, 2007-12-17 07:37

actually it did and i was counting on the feeling you had when you have a furniture from line ( home furnishing )
thnx

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Mintsauce | Sun, 2007-12-16 22:08

I might just not get it, but I believe "More than A furniture" is incorrect.

It should read:
1 - More than just furniture OR
2 - More than just a couch.

If this was not done on purpose, I'd suggest hiring a copy-writer. And if I just happened to miss the point, oops.

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natobasso | Mon, 2007-12-17 02:20

Ditto, Mint. :)

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monther | Mon, 2007-12-17 07:28

unfortunately it done on purpose already and it seems that you miss the point dude :)

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dpc | Mon, 2007-12-17 14:42

"unfortunately it done on purpose"

not a really convincing statement that the ad's bad grammar was done on purpose.

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gwells | Mon, 2007-12-17 14:37

i mean, if people don't get it, is it effective?

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archmedia | Mon, 2007-12-17 16:56

cause when i see an ad with shit grammar that doesn't have a joke connotation to it, i think to myself "well that's a bust! and a waste of money since they got mistakes"

with that said, you're trying too hard to be creative. ditch the grammar mistakes and get to the point... the couch, not some clever grammatically incorrect slogan

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