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Drugo (99 points) | Sat, 2005-09-03 19:36

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I'd like to get some feedback about this work..I did it in one day and half (to color drawings, animate them)using photoshop and after effects..the complete movie is available here.

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Ivan | Sat, 2005-09-03 20:09

It's very cool. Especially if it only took you half a day!

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iancorey | Sat, 2005-09-03 23:45

I like it too. The cigar falling to the ground is slow for my taste. Very nice characters and stylistic backdrops and lettering.

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rogrerogre | Sun, 2005-09-04 00:42

The music was a great fit with the animation. That is a really fun and sharp animation.

roger

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Fuelrock | Sun, 2005-09-04 05:01

There isn't much I can say that's wrong or needs work on. I'll agree with the cigar falling a bit slow, but that's such a small point. Well done and a lot of fun

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Drugo | Mon, 2005-09-05 08:36

the great challenge was to concept, color and realize the entire work in few hours ...there are several mistakes (the slowcigar is the biggest one), but I really had no time enough to work on details.

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Jammo | Tue, 2005-09-13 10:21

Thats a great bit of work, i like the concept, the colors and the musics great.

Fav bits: rotating star bursts (i know, im easily pleased) and the trumpets at the beginning, great stuff :D

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Mintsauce | Mon, 2006-05-08 16:17

Nice work for 1.5 days! Drawing those characters would take me days!

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