my call card

I hate "designs" and "Designer" fonts... it's too much 80's too much styles

the brush needs improvement.

Those colors are not working at all. I agree witht he comment on the fonts, they are bad choices. The bottom left corner is way too heavy, in fact the whole card is too heavy on the left. Because you have several elements on the page, I would suggest removing 'tel' 'cell' and 'email', either just put one of your numbers on there or put 't' 'c' and 'e'

Also, unless the address is to an actual business office, I would leave it off.

The smaller type is lost. You have too many fonts going on. The colour is burning my retina. Pick one image: the pen, or the inkscape. Aren't there two areas codes in Trinidad? 868 and 809? Ditto on dropping the address and only one number, preferably your cell phone.

By the way, where can I procure a hotail email address?

This is very close, imho - I really like the Inkscape thing. The word "designs" needs a little breathing room - move it over to the right and down just a nudge (and maybe a hair smaller too) - delete the underline. The name can be a little bigger and moved to the left a nudge (or two) and down a nudge also. Drop the word "Designer" altogether - it's unnecessary imo (or at least change it to the same font as the name - NO Brush Script please). Then center the bottom lines, make it 2 lines instead of 3 by bringing up the email addy. Drop the word "Tel" and "Email" - also unnecessary. Make those two lines the same size as the person's name (you might try the next weight up on the font for both the name and the adress info too - just to see if it works better). Square the corners.

BAM BABY... done. I'm working up your invoice.

I like the inkscapes and the pen. Just move the phone numbers to the bottom right corner, leaving the address in the left corner to balance it out.

The color is very.......um....bold. It could be fun to change the color every printing, however.

All in all, I rather like it.

I like the mark inkscape, but not the treatment of "DESIGNS".

Inscape needs to be enlarged and take up the majority of the middle/near-middle area of the card.

Remove designer from beneath your name and put just your email address there instead.

Once all that is done, you will need to see visually where you land prior to working in your tel numbers and address lines.

I think the font that "designer" is in needs to go. It seems really out of place.