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Concept? Dyue? What am I looking at here?
Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
I don't get it. what is dyue? and what is the <11> all about? and why is the 'e' highlighted?
what does your business do and what is the meaning of this logo?
living on dreams and custard creams.
Is heaven a haven or a haven hell? WHAT IS WITH THIS ONE?!
"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber
Ohhhh, i think this is a card for a fancy, self serve 7/11 that has EVERY. SINGLE. MUNCHIE you can think of, a weed-heads heaven! Hence the green!
Rejoice! The Heaven 11 is here with it's flowing pop fountains, mountains of chips, fritos and cheesies, frozen popsicle glaciers and licorice statues!
Heaven 11, it's like you died and went to heaven!(tm)
Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
Damn! I need a shop like that near me....
living on dreams and custard creams.
I'm confused.
Can you justify all of your choices? Why is the "e" green? Why that font? What's with the punctuation?
A good brief is important when you expect to receive serious critique.
@Group: D'Yue is a health and beauty group that works similar to Avon or Amway. (www.dyuelife.com). Whether Juntaro is a launching a business under "D'Yue" I don't know, but if so, the green is aptly chosen.
@Juntaro:
- The "11" needs to be dropped to be center to the rest of the line.
- On the yellow background the green is kind of hard to see.
Like others have said, this logo has no "concept". Without a proper brief (the client's requirements, strategic guidelines) and a concept (the designer's effective and creative interpretation of those guidelines) the logo can't mean anything or be judged (critiqued) as either a good or bad execution of that brief. It's like hearing a sentence out of context. It can mean anything - and in this case, nothing.
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Leaky Penny
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-Unknown Artist
(For next time...)
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Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
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hi all, thks for all the critique. well, basically im using the concept of 7-11 but instead of tat i use it as heaven11 meaning everything u can get frm there...as for dyue is the company name..as for the e meaning tat everything is deal thru online and is an e-commerce thingy. besides, anymore suggestion?
please type in complete words.
Holy shit, I was right...sorta...
Leaky Penny
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http://petersonjoseph.com
I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
Not getting any of that from the card/logo. You (personally) can attach any meaning you want to it, but if it doesn't convey that message to the viewer - it's not working.
Try again.