my personal website

Submitted by dsauna on Sat, 2008-10-11 22:24.

Critique

hI Guys. I'm working on my website. All I have now is the design. I wanna have that straight first, and then develop it. Please if you could also help me with the wording (let me know what you think)

Thanks in Advance.

http://dsaunadesign.com/temp/

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anyone???

Submitted by dsauna on Mon, 2008-10-13 16:36.

anyone???

The raw pieces are there but

Submitted by natobasso on Tue, 2008-10-14 05:37.

The raw pieces are there but the layout is loose and unaligned. The nav buttons need to be more obvious (centered, maybe?) rather than just text/afterthought on the far right.

Why is your H1 text larger than your logo? I'd fix that.

Keep going, this is a good start!

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i like the color and the

Submitted by gwells on Tue, 2008-10-14 13:30.

i like the color and the simplicity, but honestly, it looks like you're just not sure what to do with your home page. along the lines of what nate said, it looks loose and random. i think you need to decide what to do with the home page and what kind of information you should really have there.

i like the idea of having the "recent work" there, but the proportion of the boxes seems off. I'm going to guess that most of your work isn't in a 16x9 format, so i'd suggest a ratio closer to square than such a wide rectangle.

i'd ditch the "welcome to my website." it's very early 90, a half step above "welcome to our home page." and your text sounds like it belongs on the about me page.