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need logo critique: scanlith

böinek (5 pencils) | Thu, 2011-02-03 11:49

hey guys

i need your opinion or suggestions for the logo which is about an advertising firm.

thanks a lot for your help!!

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Leaky Penny | Thu, 2011-02-03 12:48

What's the concept behind it?

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Art D. Rector | Thu, 2011-02-03 19:13

Those fonts are all nice (except for that capital A in the bottom one). But it just doesn't say "advertising" to me. It says brokerage firm or insurance company. Number 3 says "new Gap logo revisited".

Start over - sketch something first - these are obviously straight to the computer ideas.

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wgzn | Fri, 2011-02-04 17:01

i HATE the word. but thats probably not your problem ; )

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qwertyale | Fri, 2011-02-04 22:31

forget the blue something

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monkey1979 | Sun, 2011-02-06 07:55

No.5

Lose the blue germanic 's' thing completely, make the strapline bigger, job done.

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