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böinek's picture
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need logo critique: scanlith

hey guys

i need your opinion or suggestions for the logo which is about an advertising firm.

thanks a lot for your help!!

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Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

What's the concept behind it?

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Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

Those fonts are all nice (except for that capital A in the bottom one). But it just doesn't say "advertising" to me. It says brokerage firm or insurance company. Number 3 says "new Gap logo revisited".

Start over - sketch something first - these are obviously straight to the computer ideas.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

i HATE the word. but thats probably not your problem ; )

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

forget the blue something

yes I'm brazilian xD

monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

No.5

Lose the blue germanic 's' thing completely, make the strapline bigger, job done.

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