Need some feed back on my logo please

Remove "Design" and you've got a winner! Or just make it more a part of the logo instead of an afterthought. The kerning is distracting as well. Let the font be what it is.

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Powerpoint is not a design application

I like Nat's idea of text removal, however I'd remove the word BIRD--the icon speaks for itself. Also, Design is kind of plunked in. I'd try and make it more part of the logo; perhaps in the same font as "Lucky" with a larger bird in the middle?

"Without deviation from the norm, progress is not possible."
— Frank Zappa

I have to agree that the kerning of "design" is distracting. I'd tighten it up some. And maybe decrease the space between Lucky and Bird.

I'd like to see how it looks on a white background.

another agreement that the wide tracking on design is distracting. it's also not very connected with the rest of the design. it doesn't seem to line up with anything, it's just floating out there and the font has a very different feel from the rest of the logo. the only thing connecting it is the color.

i like some of the other potential suggestions for integrating the bird more into the design itself. not sure how well they'd work, but i think they're all worth exploration. but if you keep the bird where it is, i think you should tighten up the word spacing between lucky and bird just a little bit more.

I just noticed you misspelled "feedback".

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Powerpoint is not a design application

ha ha.... ooops good catch!

Well, since you all agree... I'll take it off. You all made some great points on why it should be removed.

I also agree with you too. I was struggling on having the word in there, and I wasn't quite sure if it was right or not.

Thanks again for all the help!

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I really like the teal color you have there. Not too fond of the shade of yellow though. Maybe try the teal for the text and a less pukey yellow for the bird? Just an idea. Or it could just be your monitor v my monitor.

I think having the bird on top of the B, it creates a schism between the words "lucky" and "bird". I would maybe try it on the letter L. If that doesn't look right, maybe make the words "lucky" and "bird" closer together.

I am not exactly sure when it became chic to present logos against a solid color background but it isn't going to help you improve your design. For best results, take that thing down to black and white and view it on a white background. Settle on a logo and deal with color later.

The problem is that people tend to pick a flattering color to compliment their logo, and in this case, it doesn't work. Try to print that logo on paper that color and you will see what I mean.

But I vote for removing design. It's redundant and clashes with the font in Lucky Bird.
Definitely decrease the space between Lucky and Bird.
But really cool logo.

Leaky Penny
Aka Artfiend Part Deux
www.leakypenny.com

We've previously offered advice to novice logo designers that the full company name need not appear in the logo. (Ditto things like LLC and Inc.) The logo STANDS FOR the company. It isn't a product label. I rather like the idea of perching the bird on Lucky and calling it done, but without the background. If using both Lucky and Bird with the bird silhouette, I'd lose "design," or, as others have advised, work on the choice of fonts and other things so that it really integrates with the rest of the logo rather than looking tacked on as an afterthought.

Ok, now I have something else to think about.

I will have a website luckybirddesing.com. So, now I think I will work on the word "design" and tighten the space between "lucky" and "bird".

The reason I kerned out the letters is because I didn't want "design" to be too large, and I wanted it to line up with "Bird", but obviously it didn't work.

Thank you all again for such great FEEDBACK (one word) tee hee...