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Maurizio's picture
58 pencils

new logo

Last Planet is a multiplayer game center,those some new logos where i'm working on,who is the better for you?
tx!
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stephanie's picture
518 pencils

#3-6 remind me way too much of the deviantart logo:

I think #1-6 are too complicated, and I think the "C" and "P" below the images are unclear and unable to read - I don't think you should have both an icon for the logo, and stylize the type as much as you have.

If I were to choose one that I like the best, it would be number 8 - but you need more description than that to have me choose - is the game set in space? Are there spaceships that look similar to this? Even if you were to go with #8, I would definitely simplify, there are a few too many elements.

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Gabx's picture
7 pencils

Seraphim stole my thoughts!

Anyway,

I'm going to tell you what elements I like:
1. I like the ring in #2
2. I like the blue thing in #9 because it seems to be an arising planet
3. I like the yellow ring in #6

What I don't like is the fonts, and the, what I think is a spaceship, it gives me the idea of an "A" or a weird robot face.

I think you should try more the "planet concept" than the "fancy font concept"

Well, cya! good job.

julianaduque's picture
168 pencils

The only one that work for me is #10. #8 could work as well. The other I feel are too messy and the wording has little or none legibility.
Like Gabx said, stay away from the "fancy font concept".
Maybe try your logos out in BW first, see how they work.

Good luck!

david.rudaitis's picture
16 pencils

I am going to go with seraphim on this one. 1-7 I think are throw away ideas it is nice that you tried them but they just do not work. I like 8 probally the best but I see something godd in all the last three. it is funny to read the previous comments before my post since I am thinking along the same lines as them. I would also recommend simplfy and maybe go with more of the planet idea. Typeography does lack something on this 3 try some difernt font chooses. overall it looks like you are working towards a solution but just not there yet.
Good Luck!

tlarson2k's picture
66 pencils

In #10, it almost looks like a hybrid car rather than a rocket ship. Maybe it needs little thruster wings? Also, not sure if intentional, but I also see a face in the rocket.

rayaneosman's picture
2 pencils

1,2,3,4,5,6 are very complicated,last planet should be written in a simple way using a font related to the concept(planet and game ) could help u . Using at the same time the L and P as an icon and the same font below the icon is too much for a logo. if u go with the icon u have to avoid using a complicated font and vice versa.
So i would say 7,8,9 are better comparing to 1,2,3,4,5,6 eventhough they r not my favorite
Good luck

olliesan1's picture
288 pencils

I like 8 & 9, but I think the type could be more dramatic.

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

9, but with a stronger font. It's getting lost.

Can you do this in black on a white background first? The black background with colors is very distracting.

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Maurizio's picture
58 pencils

Thanks guys for the nice tips..about the Deviant logo i'm with you.it seems too close. :(
Natobasso i'll post soon the only black logo for a clear vision.
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