Of the two presented, I prefer the one on the right. My only concern would be the legibility of the word monsieur as the logo reduces; however, if the DJ is going to be generally referred to as LE BER then you'd probably be okay in getting away with this.

The two stars--I'd run with one only--either dot the "i" in monsieur, or work one or two into LE BER; ie. make the B a solid black and paste white stars where the inside white of the letter is now. Or...take one star and unite the two words LE BER by attaching the center serif strokes of the letters E and B to the star.

Nice work.

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looks a lot like the Brooklyn lager logo. i see it a lot as coasters at the bars.

Haha..thats funny, ive never seen that logo. Not that surprising as i live in Holland :)
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the one on the left feels very heavy, not sure it fits in the "chic" category you were going for. it does come across more like a "beer" label than a "champagne" label.

i agree that the one on the right is better, but there are balance issues. the "monsieur" doesn't feel like it fits with "le ber." the weight difference is so significant and it's accentuated by the big black stars. plus centering it feels off (and it's not really centered, it's slightly off center to the right).

An example of club style:

Your font choices are a bit out of date for club logos/design. Go with more rounded, futuristic fonts.

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I kind of like the right one, but the big space between the two words is disturbing.