New site Critique Please
jaronoff (89 pencils) | Tue, 2005-07-05 20:35
This is my new website design. I am busy updating the portfolio section as well as fiddling with SIFR and PHP.
Anyone have any suggestions? I know certain areas look a little rough, let me know what you think overall though.
thanks.
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nice feel. being a diver myself, i can very much relate to this header design and colors.
bit more blue highlights in the body would reiterate the header well. i think a bit more whitespace for the logos on the top would be needed as well. they look confined in there. i can't really tell, but maybe the font for the menu is a bit big?
My wife thinks that it looks pretty cluttered. I am starting to think maybe the top menu graphic is too big. detracting from the content, will play around with it and let you all know.
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I think its a nice and simple site, but lacks something that makes it stand out and be memorable.
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Very nice site there jaronoff!
The only thing that bugged me was that the right column (content/entries) of the body was quite "heavier" than the left one.. A solution to this would be to put the left side in a light grey box. It would perhaps help the balance the site a bit.
I quickly made an image to illustrate what i'm meaning.
Anyways, it's just an idea, and it doesn't hurt to try it.