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ajojeda's picture
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Newly Designed, What would you change

Part of a weather package i'm designing. Suggestions for improvements would be greatly appreciated.

ajojeda
Shout Corporation
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creativemurf's picture
160 pencils

I would raise the contrast between the background and the main elements. From an ease of visibilty standpoint the background is too bright which makes it difficult to focus on the important information.

ajojeda's picture
23 pencils

Background blend worked. Looks Great

ajojeda
Shout Corporation
Working Worldwide
http://www.shoutco.com

mokenke's picture
315 pencils

And also make you rwatermark less aggressive, it does not let one appreciate the actual art.

mokenke

ACE LONDON's picture
18 pencils

the background bars, i will keep all one colour (blue) or use another like red or green... i would also get rid of the effect on the text, drop a shadow and make it more reader friendly. also move the logo to the left or right and put the 6 day forcast bit in its place, may play with coulours.

ace

Rick's picture
75 pencils

Maybe you could have the "6 Day Forecast" text follow the 3D theme?

Raising the wrapped text and making it align with the center of the "Custom Weather" IMG on the floor would be good too.

Nice job.

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tlarson2k's picture
66 pencils

What if the temperature goes over 100+ (or -100) degrees? Seems you only have room for two digits?

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