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Novi.no

Novi.no

This site is going to be made for a school project. This is just a scratch. We are from Norway so we apologies for the norwegian text.

graphic/webdesign firm by the way.

And the header is not ours we will make our own before we go live.

Leaky Penny's picture
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What do you mean by the header is not yours?

Leaky Penny
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We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

jigge's picture
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copied, just to have something there...

Leaky Penny's picture
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Oh, so you plagiarized.

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

jigge's picture
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We are not going to use this header....

Leaky Penny's picture
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*sigh*

Then come back when you have the header. Kinda hard to get a proper critique when the works incomplete no?

Also, you have another classmate who posted this same project up, same company name, same general design.

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso

Anders's picture
72 pencils

A little off topic, but the Norwegian text has several misspelled words and punctuation errors. Might want to fix that up, so it doesn't seem so unprofessional.

Logo details will disappear when shrunk.

But I like the general design. Nice and tidy. Although, be sure to have the law on your side when it comes to certain PS-brushes. I'm pretty sure the smoke brush is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 3.0 License.

3dogmama's picture
1925 pencils

There's a smoke brush...holy shit. Learn something new every day.

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

whoaitsaimz's picture
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Wow you guys are tough. But yes, it would be good to have your own header so we can see what you actually want us to critique. Which part of this so-called "web design" is actually your work, then? What did you do?

qwertyale's picture
648 pencils

I like the concept at all. :)
We can see grid study that could be refined. I don't like the heigh of grey division.
Don't liked the header picture it's so "too much".

Ronaldo! xD

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