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jigge's picture
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Novi.no

This site is going to be made for a school project. This is just a scratch. We are from Norway so we apologies for the norwegian text.

graphic/webdesign firm by the way.

And the header is not ours we will make our own before we go live.

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Leaky Penny's picture
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What do you mean by the header is not yours?

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jigge's picture
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copied, just to have something there...

Leaky Penny's picture
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Oh, so you plagiarized.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

jigge's picture
7 pencils

We are not going to use this header....

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

*sigh*

Then come back when you have the header. Kinda hard to get a proper critique when the works incomplete no?

Also, you have another classmate who posted this same project up, same company name, same general design.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

Anders's picture
413 pencils

A little off topic, but the Norwegian text has several misspelled words and punctuation errors. Might want to fix that up, so it doesn't seem so unprofessional.

Logo details will disappear when shrunk.

But I like the general design. Nice and tidy. Although, be sure to have the law on your side when it comes to certain PS-brushes. I'm pretty sure the smoke brush is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 3.0 License.

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

There's a smoke brush...holy shit. Learn something new every day.

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

whoaitsaimz's picture
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Wow you guys are tough. But yes, it would be good to have your own header so we can see what you actually want us to critique. Which part of this so-called "web design" is actually your work, then? What did you do?

qwertyale's picture
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I like the concept at all. :)
We can see grid study that could be refined. I don't like the heigh of grey division.
Don't liked the header picture it's so "too much".

yes I'm brazilian xD

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