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Submitted by Reza Mohamudally on Thu, 2008-04-03 05:09.

Hi, its my first submission here, the company provides tour for tourist around mauritius, i have use green and yellow colours to represent Mauritius and a bird, to show travelling...
please comment on it
thanks

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Leaky Penny's picture

Hmmm..weird...

Submitted by Leaky Penny on Thu, 2008-04-03 13:45.

I can't see it.

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3dogmama's picture

Hey birdie birdie

Submitted by 3dogmama on Thu, 2008-04-03 17:57.

Clever tuck-in with the negative bird, but it's a little lost. To strengthen the bird's existence try reversing the edging of a wing from some of the green lettering. I like the simplicity of it. The T reminds me of a palm tree.

Watch your kerning between the P and a in "Paradise". I'd also make the two words, with the exception of the stylized T the same font.

ttfn!
3dogmama

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zzz's picture

I know I'm 20/20 vision but

Submitted by zzz on Fri, 2008-04-04 16:47.

I know I'm 20/20 vision but I can't see it. It doesn't appear in my screen.

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