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Part II

Here's part II of the graphics package I've designed. Your suggestions for improvement would be great.

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Part II

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wurx's picture
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I find it all too busy and hard to read.

Simplify the background maybe?

mugget's picture
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i agree, it's a bit to hard to distinguish each element from the other. everything seems to be in focus, maybe if you think of it like a photo, the text and things you want people to see would be in sharp focus, but the background can maybe bit a bit softer, blurred, not as prominent.

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Those are the backgrounds the Weather Studio Picked out...I will pass this on to them and let them know.

Thanks,
ajojeda

ajojeda
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Working Worldwide
http://www.shoutco.com

Flub-Dub's picture
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i would suggest having a screen of "glass" placed in perspective (3d) in the environment. lets say a sky-blue one, with a bit of opacity.

that way you can have a background for the meteo data, while not obstructing too much the environment, if the client is so keen on it.

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oh, and you could lose the copyright watermark.
no one will steal your work around here mate.

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It screams 'small midwestern town' to me. :)

Background is WAY too busy for the info. Lose the impact font and get creative.

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