Part II
ajojeda (23 points) | Sat, 2006-04-29 21:24Here's part II of the graphics package I've designed. Your suggestions for improvement would be great.
ajojeda
Shout Corporation
Working Worldwide
http://www.shoutco.com
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I find it all too busy and hard to read.
Simplify the background maybe?
i agree, it's a bit to hard to distinguish each element from the other. everything seems to be in focus, maybe if you think of it like a photo, the text and things you want people to see would be in sharp focus, but the background can maybe bit a bit softer, blurred, not as prominent.
Those are the backgrounds the Weather Studio Picked out...I will pass this on to them and let them know.
Thanks,
ajojeda
ajojeda
Shout Corporation
Working Worldwide
http://www.shoutco.com
i would suggest having a screen of "glass" placed in perspective (3d) in the environment. lets say a sky-blue one, with a bit of opacity.
that way you can have a background for the meteo data, while not obstructing too much the environment, if the client is so keen on it.
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oh, and you could lose the copyright watermark.
no one will steal your work around here mate.
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always outnumbered, never outgunned
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always outnumbered, never outgunned
http://www.behance.net/mimimi
It screams 'small midwestern town' to me. :)
Background is WAY too busy for the info. Lose the impact font and get creative.
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