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Personal BC Update

pmathews (77 pencils) | Sat, 2009-10-17 22:27

This is a quick update to my previous BC Please let me know what you think.

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qwertyale's picture
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qwertyale | Sat, 2009-10-17 22:52

yooo

now it makes sense :p

too much contrast indeed

I prefer white/grey or... orange/gray

good job : ]

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yes I'm brazilian xD

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aroberts | Sat, 2009-10-17 23:19

anyway, you can push the 'p' and 'm' over so that it crosses into the moon, it might make the connection of the moon to 'pm' that much more stronger. Also, I would reduce the size of 'graphic designer' because its a little too tight. Finally, bring up the contact info, it's too close to the edge of the black.

Art D. Rector's picture
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Art D. Rector | Sun, 2009-10-18 03:17

I'd like to see the name and the info reversed - the name on top and the info reversed out of the black. Just to compare.

kostah's picture
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kostah | Sun, 2009-10-18 18:40

i agree switch the name with info, and try playing about with the positioning of ur name & graphic designer. GL

taba's picture
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taba | Mon, 2009-10-19 16:51

Love the typography on your name. The black and white rectangles are too symmetrical, though, which makes it less interesting. I'd pull up the black further.

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