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Personal BC Update

This is a quick update to my previous BC Please let me know what you think.

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qwertyale's picture
1834 pencils

yooo

now it makes sense :p

too much contrast indeed

I prefer white/grey or... orange/gray

good job : ]

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yes I'm brazilian xD

aroberts's picture
262 pencils

anyway, you can push the 'p' and 'm' over so that it crosses into the moon, it might make the connection of the moon to 'pm' that much more stronger. Also, I would reduce the size of 'graphic designer' because its a little too tight. Finally, bring up the contact info, it's too close to the edge of the black.

Art D. Rector's picture
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I'd like to see the name and the info reversed - the name on top and the info reversed out of the black. Just to compare.

kostah's picture
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i agree switch the name with info, and try playing about with the positioning of ur name & graphic designer. GL

taba's picture
163 pencils

Love the typography on your name. The black and white rectangles are too symmetrical, though, which makes it less interesting. I'd pull up the black further.

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