Personal Business Card *Updated
Tadams (61 pencils) | Wed, 2008-01-23 15:44
I've made some adjustments from the previous version. I reworked the Todd Adams a little bit and adjusted the T especially. Most importantly I got rid of the previous serif font and went with something that matched the style better. Lastly I adjusted the positioning on the front of the card to align things better.
Curious if you feel I should mark this off as finished, or if it still needs some work.
I've attached a flat version as an additional file as well.
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I didn't see your first version but, this is slick!
Very nice amendments, Todd!
I don't remember seeing that faded dribble before. I think it's distracting -- looks like a printing error. And if the idea of repeating it on the back is to suggest transparency, you'll need to flip horizontal.
You seem to have two conflicting light sources for the bevel effects on your name and the logo. That's really nitpicking, though.
I like it!
Mara
Thanks Mara, that "dribble" was there before, but I think I might lose it on the front of the card and just keep it on the back. Thanks for pointing that out.
You're right the light sources are different as they were rendered seperately, I never even thought of it until you just pointed it out. I don't mind the way it looks currently, but I might go ahead and try it with the same direction just to see how that plays out.
Thanks for the comments!