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I'm not going to lie, this is boring. The bottom type is the least of your concerns. that B doesn't look right at all.
Leaky Penny
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When I leave, close together like butt cheeks.
-Grits N' Gravy
Like the idea, but the execution doesn't work. That B is a problem (as noted), but also the script initials are overpowered by that thick border on the "seal" as well. The name at the bottom is too small proportionally for the seal and those fonts do not compliment each other very well imo (although they might if the proportions were correct - hard to tell at this size). A smaller quirk would be your middle initial. If it's that important to have it in your name, shouldn't it also be in the seal? I'd go without in both places, myself.
Not very personal.. Why not join the C w. the B in one swoop, ending the B similarly as the beginning of the C? And the ring is too fat for the 'gentile' font, should'nt really exceed the fatness of the lettering I think.. and your name and purpose will get lost in translation. Just my penny :)
MONEY is but a rude interruption of the really meaningful.
The initials read AB to me. The circle is overpowering the initials and the type below it.