Personal logo revise
kiwi2009 (15 points) | Thu, 2009-10-08 15:26I took everbody's advice and put more space between Kristen and Wells. Also I changed around the fonts with the two LL's on Wells. Does this help it read any better, let me know what you think.
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IMO, no. Colours are too pale, and it just seems like it's trying to hard. When you have to mix and match fonts in the same word, somethings not right.
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
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it's not really doing it for me. even though i know what it's supposed to be, i still have to work to see it. i don't think that's effective, since it's actually your company name.
it would be different if you had something subtle going on that was apropos, but not integral. like the arrow in the fedex logo. but since the part that isn't easy to see is the second half of your name, i don't think it works.
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See the idea and like it. But there are a couple problems that simply cannot be resolved imo. The backwards t looks like a backwards t and the n is totally screwing up the two Ls where they look like an n too. Unless you have some kind of epiphany on how to solve those two problems, I'd put this in your bag of tricks and hope that one day you find an application where it will work - because it's not working here. Sometimes even good ideas have to die a natural death - time to take this one off life support, Kristen.
Your concept is (was) great, but the colors on the "dead" side and I agree with the critics, the double "L" still looks like the bottom part on your "n".
I suggest you move on to a new concept and put this one on the shelf for the moment, when you find the missing link to fixing the "n" and double "L"s, pick it up again and show us. On the other hand, the concept is really good.