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chrisf's picture
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Personal Name Card

Hello, please critic, i currently am not associated with any organization. but i'd like to get some business as freelance. and it's for meeting new people. Do you think I should use rich black or this dark grey? Is my name in bold good or bad? is it too big? thanks

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Personal Name Card

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Waleed's picture
540 pencils

I like it.. Just a few questions:

- Is there a URL for people to see sample work?
- Do the business card, letterhead, envelope, and website complement each other?
- Is there an identity or logo to show?

MacRankin's picture
10 pencils

The orange background and space you've put around the text seems to work well in drawing the eye in closer.

I really like the text, or should i say typographic style - goes really well with those pluses. It almost looks medieval of the movie film set variety.

I'm not so keen on the size of the text that gives your name details.

P.S. I'm not a graphic designer nor am i a typoghrapher, so what i just said probably sucks!

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Ivan's picture

You need a concept! What shall I remember you for? I like the orange background, but you need to do more than that.

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