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bunscobear's picture

Hi all
I am submitting my personal website design for what i suppose can be described as a "critique in progress"

Its my 1st css designed site im building. Im looking for some 'overall design' comments of what ive done so far - accounting for the fact that its a work in progress and nowhere near finished yet.

http://www.case236.co.uk/mysite/rural.html

Im going through a serious "should i bother with this whole thing - not good enough, cant cut it etc" phase at the moment.

So i need some good o'l honest opinions - dont think i need say to rip me apart if needed - ive no (well some at least) ego to bruise in this case so..... well, you know the rest

im considering trying something else for a career - lost the joy of 'potentially making it'

only problem is - what else is there for me to do, this is the only thing i think i can be half decent at - well thats another matter altogether.

personal website design
Elias's picture

Beautiful Work

Like the way you blended the face into nature and background! Creative.

Korteenea's picture

I like the look, but you've

I like the look, but you've made the visual elements a little too large. Same with your Retro version, too. I think they'd be far more successful if you shrank the image elements so that they're not so overwhelming. The content is the most important part, always.

calvincarl's picture

Lookin good, but not quite there

The rural version looks pretty good, yet I do agree that the elements may be too large. But I think they are okay because most of the information is "above the fold." Also, the rollover colors are pretty hideous. That pinkish-red and lavender has to go.

The retro version looks neat, but those picture elements are way too huge. People hate scrolling down to read information. And virtually all your info on the rural version is "below the fold." This is the only I think absolutely needs to be addressed.

Otherwise, everything looks great. Very professional treatment of the photos.

CalvinCarl.com

Nandakumar's picture

Good!

It could have been better!!!

Jammo's picture

Constructive critism please

Do you have any suggestions or more detailed comments about how you feel this could have been better, Nandakumar?

Thanks
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jammindesigns.co.uk

rageh's picture

Get footer and make text smaller

The lack of footer bothers me. Also text is too big. The pinkish-red colors upset the color scheme. Otherwise great work. something you could be proud of.

bunscobear's picture

as stated, nowhere near

as stated, nowhere near finished yet.

thanks everyone for the constructive critique.

iancorey's picture

Making it?

You wanna be the Christopher Walken of web design? Just hang in there.
The design and the photo manipulation is really nice. It would be a shame for you to give up those skills. Finish.
As for the photos being too big and people needing to scroll... bosh. 99.9% of webpages require one to scroll. That's why there's that little wheel on your mouse.

bunscobear's picture

thanx for the

thanx for the encouragment.

as for the scroll, thats what i was thinking - although in the back of my mind was the concerns of the other opinions in this matter.
It is a fundamental aspect of online communication and maybe i should heed more to it....or at least some kind of compromise.

once again thanx for your imput.

sidesey's picture

good stuff

It generally looks very good, don't think you really need the retro tab, do you? Don't get why you have the most of the same info repeated, but i may have missed something. Agreed about losing the orange and purple colours, maybe try a more sympethetic brown or greeny colour. You could add some slightly stronger colour (again brown or green) to the some of the headers and space the paragraphs a bit more too - see how it looks. I guess it could all be scaled down a touch, but thats about all i can think of really, but don't lose the dramatic effect of the face etc. Looks a lot better than some so called professional sites that are just plain blocks of info. Really cool, i wish i had that talent in web design! The links don't seem to work, but i guess that is because it is a work in progress.

bunscobear's picture

i think the funky colours

i think the funky colours could be down to a problem on how ones device is reading the colour OR i may have embeded the wrong profile OR not embeded a colour profile period!

ive also noticed on some windows displays the horible lavender/muddly red family thing going on - on my mac the colours are what they should be -greens and browns in the rural and various brown/green pastals in the retro.

better check that out. Any ideas on what i can do to fix the problem (my proof colour visual setting in PS is usually set to windows rgb)

Orange's picture

Nice

The rural/retro tabs look out of place. They don't match the look of the rest of the design.
Also, the angular styling of the bottom of the navigation (which cuts of the leaf) doesn't match the more 'organic' look of everything else.

bunscobear's picture

mmm... ok, the tabs are very

mmm...

ok, the tabs are very unlikely to stay the way they are.
As for the angular styling - yeah - maybe your right there. Although theres something about the unnatural within the natural i like about it ( obviously, subjective in the extreme)

But that 'awkwardness' was what made me keep it in.

something to consider nonetheless, thanx for your imput.

sidesey's picture

funky colours

i am using a mac and colours are as on your windows pc, i don't have profiles set up, maybe thats the problem, its a home mac, but i am guessing a lot of people wouldn't sorry can't help more than that on this... the only thing i can think is maybe your not using web safe colours? As i said web design is not my thing, but hopefuly you can fix it, and/or someone else can help.

bunscobear's picture

thats scary!! I think i

thats scary!!

I think i forgot to mention that im on a mac! - jeeze now im really confussed!

on my set up there a variety of greens/ browns etc

mmmm....

iancorey's picture

Pink or Purple

#CC98FB is the color that is bugging everyone -your "current" id on "Item one."
The yellow/goldenrod :hover color lends a really nice highlight to the otherwise dark central elements of the site. Same with the orange-crimson color of the :hover's on the first-level <li>s.

bunscobear's picture

the colours are there purely

the colours are there purely for 'web authoring' reasons i.e: standout like a motherf**ker.

no design commitments there.

although i was maybe leaning toward the golden :hover colour for that punch factor and its not too far removed from the whole natural thing. Almost 'sun' like maybe. mmmmm

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