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Relda's picture
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Pixel Media

This is my logo for a school project were we are supposed to design a logo of the company "Pixel Media". Pixel Media is an advertising company for technology groups like HP, Motorola etc...

Pixel Media

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natobasso's picture
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Again, get all these versions in one file. :)

Okay, this one is getting somewhere; just make sure you don't make 'media' an afterthought. Incorporate it into the logo if you can.

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mara06's picture
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Nat, these posts are from several different people.

Mara

natobasso's picture
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True. But if they are in the same class at the same school doing the same project, they need to get their head's together. Or apart. Whatever the case may be. :)

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mara06's picture
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D'accord. See my further remarks on the subject, addressed to Zelda below.

Mara

Mara

archmedia's picture
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really, 5 different people posting for the same reason.. it's becoming spam.. can we just get these deleted already...

not to mention, they all suck..

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Architectural Technician - Multimedia Designer
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Zelda's picture
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Its really disturbing to hear that kind of feed back from you, we just want you guys to critique several points.Not only to critique us but also tell us what we have to improve in our area

Hey Guys lol

archmedia's picture
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1) we're not here to baby step you through it all
2) did the whole school decide to come on here and get free advise?
3) is this a joke? really, we've given some advice, then a bunch of people with the same "school assignment" just come running out of the wood work looking for advice
4) has any of the advice AT ALL been taken? some of these designs seem really repetitive, from different people at that!

sorry, suck might not have been the right word, but annoying sure is. we're designers by trade, on here to give random free advice or suggestions to people. we're not here to act as teachers to half-a-dozen students working on the same project....

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Architectural Technician - Multimedia Designer
www.ArchMedia.us

mara06's picture
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With all due respect, Zelda, get used to it.

If you barge into a place without so much as a "good afternoon" and start making demands that effectively require total strangers to do your homework for you -- which is unethical in any setting -- you should expect some "disturbing" reactions. I can assure you that if you walked into a flesh-space professional design studio with the same attitude, and with the same level of work speaking volumes about your right to be treated as a fellow professional (or not, as the portfolio may be), you would be invited to leave faster than the Art Director could say, "And don't let the door hit you on the way out."

Now, if you had approached us with a polite introduction and asked if it might be appropriate for you to ask a few questions about a class assignment, then offered a few sketches of what you'd come up with so far along with an explanation of what you were trying to achieve, you might have a very different experience.

Or not.

You follow on the heels of a spectacularly annoying visitor to CB, so it's possible you've caught us in a very bad mood. But you know what? That's life. Designers have to gauge people's moods and biases all the time. It's part of the business. Might I suggest that you take this to heart, and start working on that?

Now excuse me. I have to take my Furious Old Beetch medicine and go to bed.

Mara

Zelda's picture
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ok

Hey Guys lol

garyW's picture
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So far 5 or 6 of you from the same class have all asked for critiques on the same assignment. Several of the posts seem to have been self-deleted. I know when I was in design school rarely were projects discussed among other students ( or total anonymous strangers). Usually things like library research and lots of late-nite brainstorming was involved in finding design solutions.

I stated my point of view in the previous thread --- you had no reply to it, yet more posts keep coming. So, how about we find some common ground and make this useful to all of us.

How did this get started with the students posting on CreativeBits? Do groups of students working on assignments usually go online to have their work critiqued by professionals? Do students produce better work this way rather than using their own talent or critical thinking?

Is this something you would feel comfortable discussing with your class instructor? If not, why?

If yes, .... tell us more! In fact, how about your instuctor join in and we'll critique your work like crazy. (just kidding about that)

:)

3dogmama's picture
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Right on! I've been watching these school assignments bombard CB. I don't know if times have changed since I last attended school, but back then we did our assignments sans feedback, until delivered to our professor. I didn't say to my roomies, "Hey, guys, what do you think of this?" No. I sat down, designed on my own, learned on my own and developed as a designer. How do you expect to learn and grow if we now hold your hand? You have to make and learn from your own mistakes.

ttfn!
3dogmama

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Leaky Penny's picture
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I guess I was lucky...we had critique sessions in class involving all my classmates...albeit when the project was done. It's very important to know what's right and whats wrong with a design, especially when you get that info from someone who's not of the design world ( Husband, wife, brother, sister, cat)

That being said, dumping crap ( not your projects in particular) on to CreativeBits and expecting us to magically come up with award winning suggestions is plain lazy. Where is your teacher? couldn't it be better for the person handing out the project to be the judge of whats good or not? School is the tie when you want to make mistakes and having the people here helping you guys out with every single step of the process is plainly cheating. And by the way, by no means whatsoever am I a logo designer, but I can whole heartedly say all these logos suck. They look like the type of logos you'd see for mom and pop shops, pawn shops and generic hairstyle salons.

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