Please i want your Comments ....

Normally a title has a title, some body copy, contact details etc etc etc. It is useful to get some more info! Map looks good though.

Normally a poster has a title, some body copy, contact details etc etc etc. It is useful to get some more info! Map looks good though.

There needs to be a mandatory "concept form" filled out before anyone posts something for critique.

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How about a skinny dark hand holding the continent of Africa.

i hardly see any evidence of concept in your work.
if i can read this right "2nd Africa Congress on Pain"
then i think that your flow comes from investigating the meanings of Pain in Africa.
What kind of pain is it?
Who bears that pain?
What is a solution to that pain?
What is the purpose of the Congress?
Who is the target audience?
etc etc. there are lots of questions that can get you started with a concept.

and you need all the elements for the poster before the draft, not after.
dates, names, location, logos, copy etc. as already stated above

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always outnumbered, never outgunned

a 2nd thought, you should do a bit of homework regarding the Congress.
this is the 2nd, how was the first? who was invited?
what was debated, what did they do. that will help you know your client.

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always outnumbered, never outgunned

You are speaking about nothing. You show me africa in 3D. I thought this is a CD Movie. It's name African Congress.

infos. Maybe a body copy which tells me the story.

This is not a posted, just a 3d render. You need to come up with a message!

My 2 cents..

listen to flub-dub

i know thats not great advice but he gives you advice that your client would want you to know, the more you know about this project the easier ideas will come to u and overall better it will be

all i really have to say (besides the fact that this looks like a very very early start to a poster) is to change the typeface on the 3D Africa its very hard to read

hold on gays ..... it's just idea ..

Maybe steer away from so many Photshop filters. The copy is too difficult to read because of the beveling and the perspective. Maybe if you just played around with the actual composition instead of the filters, you might have something.

Besides, the continent of Africa is just floating there. It doesn't look right.

Suzanne Maestri-Walters :: Graphic Designer