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Pollution Control Brochure

This is an pollution control brochure concept. Presented to client, rough draft not art-worked for final purpose.

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the brochure text is well grided, I read with pleasure.

the front picture is a little bit agressive imho... you could use a bit more persuasion using various green scissors flying around and one of them to cut this smoke. this hand thing goes phallic too and could be avoided if possible.

yes I'm brazilian xD

captonjohn's picture
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No issues because this is an unused concept. I liked your idea of scissors and would use it here because that seems more polite and effective. Of course this seems over promising.

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http://www.narendrakeshkar.com

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