Postcard Design 2
vanshea (47 points) | Mon, 2007-12-17 16:19The company I work-Empress- for is branching out into the design services arena-EmpressID-for it's broadcast based clients. The idea here is to send each client 3 very different postcards to show our ability to concept fresh ideas. This is postcard 2. All postcards would be received by clients on the same day.
Van
www.vanshea.com
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This is extremely difficult to read since you've picked an image that has in focus and out of focus imagery. At first I did not like the doodling/note taking treatment but I think it could be more effective not on that napkin...that implies this was written at a bar!! Maybe the "person" behind this was drunk when they wrote "world domination".....hmm? I like the direction of your other design (fists) much better overall. I think this one overall is weak and incohesive in concept.
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Thanks for the honesty!
Very cool.
Van
www.vanshea.com
i thought the hanky was supposed to be the postcard at first lol. wouldn't be a bad idea though ;)
It will be a great idea if you focus on the message. Whittle all the extra ideas down to one line and you've got a winner. Right now there's WAY too much going on.
Maybe, "We're printing experts. And now we do design too," and circle it on the napkin, with no other text. Or something like that.
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Powerpoint is not a design application
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Dirt and Rust
Good suggestions!
Van
www.vanshea.com