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Postcard Design 3

vanshea's picture

The company I work-Empress- for is branching out into the design services arena-EmpressID-for it's broadcast based clients. The idea here is to send each client 3 very different postcards to show our ability to concept fresh ideas. This is postcard 3. All postcards would be received by clients on the same day.

Postcard Design 3
alamode909's picture

GREAT START!

I really like your color choices. Your overall concept is nice, but there are some things I don't understand. The word "empress" signifys a female ruler, thus, the assumed male fists creation confusion. What do they mean to the concept? I also feel if you're going to use the word "DESIGN" are your foundation for the diagonal text, then I would suggest either making "unification" horizontal so it doesn't read to someone "SUNIFICATION". I also don't read the text in any hierarchy...everything is is pretty much the same size...what word starts it? I really love what you did with the text on the right corner, although the "T" in title reads a little funny.

vanshea's picture

Excellent!

What they say in baseball: "Good eye-good eye!"

Van
www.vanshea.com

FrostByte's picture

the colors suit together

the colors suit together nicely. i would work the fists though. they seem a bit dull. maybe if you tried tracing them and making into vector art?
i don't get the logic of laying the text out like that it the upper right corner.. plus its hard to read out whats written there

how do the fists represent fresh ideas?

ladylee's picture

NICE

This is great. I'm very attracted to it. As a previous poster said..good eye!

pokie's picture

I think it's a pretty

I think it's a pretty alright start, but have a couple suggestions. They're worth what you paid for them. ;)

I don't like the logo, personally. It's too busy. Plus too big here.

What do the fists signify? I like them, but I don't know if they really fit in with the concept.

"unification" looks like it should be going with the s because of how e goes with mpress, which is kind of confusing. I'd move it further away or maybe put it over the fists. Still, I don't understand what unification has to do with anything.

empressid.com box is floating in space for no reason, I'd try to find a better way to put that on there. What does the shape (crossword puzzle style) of the text to the right for? Why is it like that? I think it's clever and looks nice, but not sure it goes well with the rest...

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