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Hi people, i am working on this for a church´s activity and wanted some opinion.

what is it? the activity is called super sabado(super saturday)
its basically a meeting to evaluate the religious educational program for the youth,

Concept? this year they are trying to focus on the main purpose of the program which is to prepare the young man and woman for life and it´s rocky path; to study, to serve as missionaries and to finally form a family.

some elements i included are the tree wich has the meaning of the tree of life which has the most sweet and delicious taste.
the temple, very important because that represents the church and a place with God, and the Iron Rod, wich will lead directly to both the tree and temple.

disregard the text in the middle , is the date but i will put it somewhere else.

what do you think?

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NRcreative's picture
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the fruit of the tree hast the most sweet and delicious taste,
my bad

qwertyale's picture
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I think you have a time machine and made this poster at 1986.

yes I'm brazilian xD

Leaky Penny's picture
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God bless you qwertyale.

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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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NRcreative's picture
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yes i know what you are talking about, the sepia filter and grainy texture, i did it on purpose i wanted it to look like a dream or something like that but not too way too colourfull

pmathews's picture
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I feel like the image underneath doesn't really go with the image on top its like two different posters and difficult to see the connection maybe if you brought the light down past there heads.

NRcreative's picture
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i was thinking that maybe take off the picture below and instead just use the open book with the metal bar coming out of it, again my idea was doing something like a dream, like if they were imagining the scene above, thats all, but if that doesnt work i think maybe the book as i explained and bring the blue gradient all the way down to cover the hole poster

NRcreative's picture
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i worked on the light above the heads just like you said pmathews and it does make a difference but still dont know, i will post the update, any other idea

please!

Anders's picture
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I think you should make it more unreal.

Like religion.

Art D. Rector's picture
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Take out the background on the two readers and combine everything into one image - as though they are dreaming about the pyramid.

Bam baby.

NRcreative's picture
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thanks for the comments, and i am working on your advice Art, thanks and sorry for replying late, i do this on my spare time

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