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hilldev's picture
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Proxy Finder Logo

Everything, besides the font, was hand done in photoshop using reference images. First and only attempt at this logo for a new script going on the market next week. Let me know your thoughts. Not my best piece but I think it looks ok. Had some trouble with the globe placement so finally I just stuck it to the side seems to look okay there.

Proxy Finder Logo

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dpc's picture
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The logo needs to more of a concrete shape, it should fit into a rectangle. Right now you have the text hanging out on the right and the image awkwardly placed on the left.

It seems like the pipe is lost within the globe, and the globe is close to being generic.

Hope it helps.

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hilldev's picture
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Yes, I agree with that. Could you explain "the globe seems generic" that I don't really understand. Not much I can do with a globe but I'm open to any suggestions you may have.

JimD's picture
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The globe and the pipe are two object that happen to have fallen on the same piece of paper... that's what it looks like. They are not ONE. They don't RELATE to each other the way I expect a logo to do.

I would try to find a way to make the pipe look like it is somehow "connected" to the globe.

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hilldev's picture
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The standard logo for a proxy is the pipe under the globe. But it just looked odd when I tried to remake it and i stuck it to the side. I see what you're saying and I agree. I'm rethinking the layout of the logo at the moment. Thanks Jim for your comment.

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