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HulaShakeJaz's picture
28 pencils

pub flyer jane does

This is for an upcoming show at a local pub. Image used for online promoting only- not intended to be a printed flyer. I would like ANY and ALL critiques. Thank you!

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Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

the way it seems cropped off, crammed into the paper size. Words seem to be too close to the page. Bottom text with website abd Myspace is a little unreadable. The overall poster doesn't indicate what kind of music is, therefore doesn't convey the feeling of the music. I'm afraid to ask: what program did you use to make this?

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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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HulaShakeJaz's picture
28 pencils

Thank you, artfiend. I agree that it looks bad. I am using the only program I have available on my computer- Microsoft picture it 2.0... I know, meant for amateur picture formatting. At this time I don't have enough memory to introduce a new program. I think that you're SO right and the shadowing is too much. I also agree that I was branding the venue more than the music. Thanks!

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Yeah, that's enough for folks around here to bring out the pitchforks and torches! Microsoft Picture 2.0?! This Gimp http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GIMP might help you out, or even http://a.viary.com/blog/peacock.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

HulaShakeJaz's picture
28 pencils

I was scared to get that reaction! I was humiliated as I was typing it!!! Thanks, I will try those out.

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