pub flyer jane does
HulaShakeJaz (28 pencils) | Tue, 2008-04-08 21:13This is for an upcoming show at a local pub. Image used for online promoting only- not intended to be a printed flyer. I would like ANY and ALL critiques. Thank you!
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the way it seems cropped off, crammed into the paper size. Words seem to be too close to the page. Bottom text with website abd Myspace is a little unreadable. The overall poster doesn't indicate what kind of music is, therefore doesn't convey the feeling of the music. I'm afraid to ask: what program did you use to make this?
Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
Thank you, artfiend. I agree that it looks bad. I am using the only program I have available on my computer- Microsoft picture it 2.0... I know, meant for amateur picture formatting. At this time I don't have enough memory to introduce a new program. I think that you're SO right and the shadowing is too much. I also agree that I was branding the venue more than the music. Thanks!
Yeah, that's enough for folks around here to bring out the pitchforks and torches! Microsoft Picture 2.0?! This Gimp http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GIMP might help you out, or even http://a.viary.com/blog/peacock.
Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com
I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
I was scared to get that reaction! I was humiliated as I was typing it!!! Thanks, I will try those out.