I do agree with you it works better than your landscape version too. I think the composition of this one is much more striking and all the elements gel together much better here too. Put the text from that one on this and i think it would work really well.
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I do agree with you it works better than your landscape version too. I think the composition of this one is much more striking and all the elements gel together much better here too. Put the text from that one on this and i think it would work really well.
the landscape version is not good at all. i dont think this image should be like that.
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